hands it back, if you're lucky, whole enough./Or wrecks you

hands it back, if you're lucky, whole enough./Or wrecks you, originally uploaded by aesop.

For Martha, my reader. (Sorry I stopped posting. I'd no idea anyone would know.)

can tear/mastery/out of your hand

can tear/mastery/out of your hand, originally uploaded by aesop.

can tear/mastery/out of your hand

can tear/mastery/out of your hand, originally uploaded by aesop.

breezes 2

breezes 2, originally uploaded by aesop.

another unworked version. Didn't much like this one either!

breezes

breezes, originally uploaded by aesop.

[breezes pick up/suddenly/unmanageably]

"not foolproof"/"oh no"

"not foolproof"/"oh no", originally uploaded by aesop.

crashing, lifting,tearing

crashing, lifting,tearing, originally uploaded by aesop.

the new colour/photoshop version of this is pretty good. I'm quite pleased with it.